Thursday, November 17, 2016

Chapter 23

We know how Brady is feeling when they are trying to pull the kayak up. It changes how the story is written. How does this make us, the readers, feel?

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  2. I think it makes readers feel kind of mad sad and angry because i mean it was very heartbreaking for me because he was safe and sound when he did not tell the truth but it was the right thing to do.

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  3. Us, the readers makes us feel anxious and sad about Brady trying to pull up the red kayak with his dad because when his dad pulled the kayak out, I was nervous to see Brady’s dad’s reaction when he saw there was holes drilled in it.

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  4. Chapter 23
    Brady is the narrator so we know how he feels when they pulled the red kayak up from the river and how his dad was feeling to when he seen the holes in the red kayak when they pulled it from the river and when they looked at it . When we read the red kayak it makes me feel so happy to read it because I just want to know what is going to happened in the story next.

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  5. I think Brady feels very nervous and anxious to get it over with.I would feel like that to or not said anything at all to my dad.I would just keep the drill hidden and not tell any body about anything.I would be the smart kid in the grape vine or the sharpest knife in the cabinet I would be a certified liar.

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  6. Chapter 23
    I think that it makes me feel like Brady is a super lair for one whole year that makes me not like him at all

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  7. I think Brady feels nerves then he was pulling the red kayak. I felt nerves when they pulled the kayak out.


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  8. It made me feel surprised because Brady thought there weren’t going to be any holes in the red kayak,but there were three holes. In the text it say “ the glue last thirty minutes”. It has been months, days, and weeks. Brady thought they weren’t going to find the kayak and that make him surprised and gility when the holes were in the bottom of the kayak.


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  9. How this makes me feel mad and sad because i didn't know he was going to tell his dad thats why i am mad and the reason why i am sad is because Brady's dad found out about the holes in the red kayak and that’s how i feel.

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  10. I was nervous when they pulled the red kayak.Caues I thought I was i was overthinking

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  11. I think it makes us, readers feel a little sad because we wanted to hear the whole story instead of the part that the author was going to write it. For me it’s ok because I dont need to see all parts.

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  12. This makes us readers feel anxious that they found the red kayak and Brady's dad would see the holes in the red kayak.

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  13. we know that that Brady is shock because that Brady though that the hole was not be there but it was still there.

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  14. It changes the story because in the beginning brady was all innocent and nothing bad Happen until the red kayak sinks and after a while he finds the drill it has his fingerprint And his was his first idea. it makes up very obnoxious because we want to know if they Will call the cop or not and we what to know the whole story.
    It changes the story because in the beginning brady was all innocent and nothing bad Happen until the red kayak sinks and after a while he finds the drill it has his fingerprint And his was his first idea. it makes up very obnoxious because we want to know if they Will call the cop or not and we what to know the whole story.

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  15. The way Brady feels makes me nervous because when the chapter ended he told his dad everything about the kayak.

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  16. Brady feels surprised just like me when he found out that the red kayak had holes on the bottom. Also Brady’s dad was surprised, and mad. I am so anxious to finish reading the rest of the book.

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  17. In the story we know that brady is the narrator and how he feels and when his dad saw the holes in the kayak and brady know how he is feeling. When they bring up the kayak brady was feeling sad and scary because in the story it says i was about to cry. But when they bring up the red kayak i was so excited because he finally told his dad.

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  18. It is making me feel sad and mad because Brady was keeping it a secret the whole entire time and it ended up killing Ben.

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